Essay 2 (description of your treasure)

My treasure is my pets "Caramel" and "Riri." They are girl. Caramel is dog and Riri is cat.
Riri is five years old. She likes adventure. She alway wants to go to outside. She often catches the smoll snake, bird and insect and brings them to me and my grandmother. I always tell her "Stop hunting!" because they are alive so we must not kill them. But, she doesn't stop it. Riri is very soft. So I always touch her. But she is unwilling to touch her. I am very sad.
Caramel is three years old. She likes eating foods. When I eat something, she always aims for my foods. And if I am off my guard, she quickly robs me of my foods. Her action is always slow but she becomes fast and quickly for foods. So she is fat. So she must does diet. She likes to walk outside. She often walk with my grandmother. They often go to park. But Carameru tires of walking soon and goes back home. My grandmother gives her a snack after walking. She is always looking forward to it. I think she goes to walking for a snack!
First week of they met each other, Riri didn't like Caramel. But they were gradually friendly. They fight sometimes and always Riri wins because Riri has very strong cat punch. Sometimes, they nap together and bask in the sun. But Caramel always gives a very big snore. It is very noisy. I want they are more happy. So I more cherish them. (258words)